I borrow moments from your future
because the past
smells old
sneakers left in the rain while you slept
inside. Slept and slept
until
what has become of you
comes nearer to what has become of me
awake for the first time. I can remember
looking forward
a lighthouse on the beach drawing circles
fussy hermit crabs finding new homes
the smell of salty sea air
seemed far away though it waved to me
I shouldn’t speak of nose hairs
something dances inside me
aromas of tomorrow. Inside now
today’s heartbeat thumps
this banging
growing louder as we get closer
bang bang
stealing from tomorrow only enlarges
the craving
pounding right now
now you’ve become my very blood
the oxygen I pull in my nose
breezy with age
banging
© 2021 | Phillip Knight Scott
Written for dVerse Poetics: Picking up some pieces
Loved the opening lines and your poem. 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂
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You are welcome. 🙂
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I borrow moments from your future
because the past
smells old
sneakers left in the rain while you slept
inside. Slept and slept
until
what has become of you
comes nearer to what has become of me
awake for the first time.
A stunning opening. I especially love the first line. A sterling poem….
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Thank you so much, Judy 🙂
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my past deffinently smells. great poem.
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I really enjoyed this fragment poem and was struck by the gathering momentum from the opening with the sneakers – and the heartbeat rhythm. These lines intrigued
“stealing from tomorrow only enlarges
the craving”
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Thanks so much, Laura!
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I like how you pull this together at the end.
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Thank you!!
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Love this especially; “what has become of you/comes nearer to what has become of me/awake for the first time.”💝💝
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Thank so much!
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Love how it started which was startling and how it fell apart into finer and finer fragments.
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Thank you! Had a few fragments that came together nicely.
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